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'Twas silent that night
and all through the house
all my family was sleeping
including my mouse.

Suddenly down front,
a scuffle and bang.
I stood up and ran,
"St. Nick's here" I sang.

I ran down the hall
to wake up my sister.
"St. Nick is here,
the jolly great Mister."

We snuck to the stairs
and peered down the well.
A shadow of a man,
tall, skiny, and swell.

We knew quite for sure,
with one look at his mitre,
this was St. Nicholas.
Was that there Zwarte Peter?

We slunk down the stairs
and out the front door,
fed carrots to the horses,
they really wanted more.

Inside we raced,
to catch a glimpse of the men
They were filling our clogs,
all of them ten.

We sat down and stared,
eyes all aglow,
at the bounty of candy,
was that a present below?

The men turned around,
we looked at our feet.
"Good evening girls,"
said the man called Zwarte Pete.

They walked out the door.
We looked back in awe,
it was true, no denying it,
their exist, we saw.

We snuck back to bed,
to await the surprise,
morning would come
and we would open our eyes.
©2007-2009 =lost-angle
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Author's Comments

This poem was written for Litmas [link] , for the poetry portion of the contest. This poem follows fixed form of an Iambic Ballad. This was based off the tradition of St. Nicholas Day.

St. Nicholas Day is a holiday that is celebrated in the European Lowlands (Netherlands and Belgium). It was started by St. Nicholas and his assistant Zwart Pete (Black Peter). They went around once a year and filled your shoes (which you left out to be shined) with treats and a gift. It is said that later on, the two of them travelled to Boston, in the US, but the tradition continues and people enjoy St. Nicholas Day on the sixth of December every year.

More about the signifigance of St. Nicholas Day as it pertains to me, coming in a journal on the sixth ;) (I'll link it then)

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:icondigitalsaviour:
Very nice! Love the spirit behind it. ^.=.^

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:iconlost-angle:
thank you, one more edit and it's going to be entered in the contest :D

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President ~iaa-m

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:icondigitalsaviour:
Well good luck! ^.=.^

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:iconlost-angle:
Thank-you, I'll make it so you are notified when I make the final rdit (tomorow) :D

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President ~iaa-m

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:icondigitalsaviour:
Right. I'd like to see the final.

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:iconlost-angle:
final is up, .....it's the same deviation, but now it's submitted, enjoy :D

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President ~iaa-m

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:icondigitalsaviour:
Good luck! ^.=.^

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:iconsugarmagic950:
This is Hiro-
hi lost i heard a lot of good things about you by marion hahaha
yeah sorry i can't understand the poem that much, my english is not that good hahah but i bet it's good

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Don't be mad be happy :D go eat some sugar:D
SML [link]
LOL
we drive on the left side in Japan.
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thank you very much.

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